Only sixty minutes of the darkest hour,
And the night will be followed by the day,
He who wants to touch her but can’t,
For he knows she will fade.
She’ll lose herself,
The spell will break,
The Night will no longer be a night.
The Day knows this,
But still he feels,
Oh once just once,
Stay with me as mine.
I want to caress you,
I want to touch you,
I want to be by your side.
I want to feel you,
I want to live you,
I want to make you mine.
The Night can’t deny nor can she accept,
An accord that feels so right,
In a disastrous dilemma she is,
Till eternity what survives.
She knows the denial will break the Day,
Will drive him miles away,
But more she fears,
Is the acceptance,
For it will bring the war to stay.
The nature will cry,
The humans will die,
The world will come to an end.
It’s not an option but a coercion,
To follow the Creator’s law
That will never amend.
It’s better we stay away said the night,
For it to work perfectly fine,
We can’t be together this time,
It’s called fate, and I can’t call it mine.
I know my touch burns you down,
Gallops you heart, soul and sound,
I still want you,
You beautiful mine,
For holding you close,
And never leaving your side.
We’ll find a midway,
For this to play,
Just tell me,
You want me to stay.
Your words work miracles,
And so do you,
Just say you want me,
The way I do.
The night finally spoke
Her words soft and new
We’ll meet twice,
When you allow me to sink in you,
Sacrifices happen both way
Said the Day,
For once it’ll be me, and in this you’ve no say.
Dawn and dusk,
We’ll be called,
Depending on who sinks into whom.
The former follows the later and the later follows anew.
The time will be a barrier, said the night,
It won’t allow us to make love more than a while,
Few moments is what we’ll have,
And once in a day is too much to bear.
Will you survive this distance?
Will you put up to this time?
Will this make you happy?
Will keep you enlivened throughout you life?
The Day gleamed,
And glowed with a smile,
Bound by circumstances,
And not by choice,
A little of you will always be better,
Than not having you at all, O mine!
The times we meet,
Will be the most beautiful times of the day,
When the sky changes its hue,
Till it reaches a bright azure or grey.
A sign that our love has survived,
That it has battled through all evils, and came alive.
A sign we went beyond distance, power and time,
To achieve our love,
And touch upon a feel so divine.
The earthlings will come and go,
The world will witness our love,
We’ll shine like diamonds with the brightest glow,
Till every unseen leaves this show.
The night smiled with teary eyes,
Surrendered herself in the arms of her mighty knight,
Melting under his warm desire,
Waiting for the dawn to arise!
Only sixty minutes of the darkest hour,
14 Replies to “Eternal Love”
I like the way you incorporate story-telling in your writings. Great post !
Thank you so much, Ajay! I think it’s the thought that counts and the minds that think alike. 🙌😌❤️💜
Beautifully crafted babes 😘😘😘
Thank you so much, Sweetheart! ❤️🤗😌💜
The way you infuse life into elements (Day and Night) is beyond my imagination. I mean if making such elements ALIVE makes a great scene, what will come out when you create great human characters in your books? Bowing down to a natural creative force inside that’s not letting you sleep!
That’s one of the best things I’ve heard about my writing till date! Thank you so much, Sagar! Appreciate every bit of it! 💜♥️☺️😌
Exotic. Elegant. Ecstatic. This might be worth a recitation with a glass of Pinot in a moonlit night 🙂
Thank you so much, Mitul!!! 🤗♥️😌💜 That would be really perfect!
I agree with what Sagar said. How the heck do you do it… Writing a frikkin love story about night and day. I especially love the part, “When you allow me to sink in you”. That shiz hit deep.
Thank you so much, Love! It takes an equally intellectual mind to realize its depth! 😌💜♥️
Its so refreshing to see the romance between the two unthinkable but paramount forces. Only a creative mind can visualise such a scene and penned it so lively.
Thanks a bunch, Parag! And only a creative mind can relate and appreciate it! 😌💜❤️♥️
My safe heaven after tiring job ❤️
Thank you so much, Sweety! ❤️😌♥️💜